By Karlie
I think homework is needed. It's important and it also keeps you out of trouble from doing bad things like drugs. And if you have nothing to do, homework is something you can do when you have nothing to do.
Homework also keeps your mind on school. So you don't forget anything that you need to remember for school. Homework can also be extra credit for some teachers. Also homework can be away for your parents to know what you're doing in school. That is I think homework is needed.
This is a very good article which is short and straight to the point but, there are indenations ,Noah
ReplyDeleteYou didnt indent but i like some of the reasons you did were good escpecialy thir senence first paragraph :)
ReplyDeleteGabe
Re-read you work. Make sure that what you wrote makes sence to you. Make sure that each sentence starts with different so there isnt so much repitition.It is way too short. But overall it is good.
ReplyDelete-Lupita
i like it because i short but i dont like it because i think homework is not nessesery and no offense but what does homework have do with dugs
ReplyDeleteISAI
You should re-read what you wrote the things you wrote. The essay is good but you wrote somethings wrong and the essay is too short.
ReplyDeleteI dont think homework is good but the essay is good.
-Marvin
I dont know how it keeps you out of trouble, or off drugs but...Kind of interesting (no offense) Try working more on indentation, punctuation, and patalization a little more. Same goes with the other.(the one i left the long comment on)I also have to disagree with you, because my parents dont care about what i do, and if i get bored i just play games. Overall, pretty good
ReplyDelete-Chad
Also, compound some sentances.
ReplyDelete-Chad