By Karlie
This is Emma she is 12 years old. Her Birthday is on May 3rd, 1997. Emma's favorite activity is having fun with her friends and going crazy sometimes even too crazy!
Her favorite flavor of cake is banana and carrot. She said it reminds her of a tropical inland, and of palm trees.
The name of her first child is going to be, Henry if it's a boy and Susie if it's a girl. She had lost 7 teeth by the age of 7 she said it hurt really bad and she is scared to twist it.
Her two main goals are to move to Hawaii with Shawni and Karlie for two years. Then she wants to open up a Frosty's with Karlie.
Emma's favorite food to snack on is Goldfishies. Her first pet is Dana she is a dog. She prefers showers instead of baths.
She doesn't really like school because she could be hanging with her friends. She has two brothers and two sisters. Emma is also the youngest in the family. She says that she is sometimes happy but not all the time.
Emma says the happiest moment is when she got her two dogs. She also says birthdays are like a fart they keep on coming. And that's Emma.
No indentations and here are new paragraphs where not needed, But it is funny and truthful HA HA HA HA HA HA
ReplyDeleteIt is very descriptive but also very funny- Nayeli
ReplyDeleteI think you had t many paragraphs and they were kind of short, but everything made me laugh.
ReplyDeleteGABE
Checking your spelling and grammar would help but otherwise i love it. it is very descriptive and hilarious,it totally sounds like Emma about the birthdays and goldfishies.
ReplyDeleteKarlie,
ReplyDeleteIt was really good but it needs a little more discription. Other than that I really liked it.
Great job!
--- Cassidy
The bad thing was the begingig.It could have been better.
ReplyDeletethen the good things I like where you said her birthday
Prestin
Dear Karlie,
ReplyDeletevery nice passage.Altough you should watch your spelling and spacing. The green is a nice color, execpt I could hardly read the passage.
-Dylan
What if she doesn't have kids?
ReplyDeletejonathan
To jonathan that was kind of rude and she will have kids.
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